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Sunday, June 4, 2017

Here is the same thought expressed in 'free verse' and two different ways.  I would appreciate your thoughts on which is clearer, which is more appealing to you, and any comments on either.

THE SACRAMENT
and
PRETENDING

In Gethsemane and on the cross
He pretended He was me.

In my daily life and when taking the sacrament
He asks me to pretend I am Him.

Dann J. Flesher
6/4/2017



PRETENDING

In Gethsemane and
On the cross
He pretended 
That He was me.

In my daily life, or
When I pray to our Father, or
When I take the sacrament,
He asks me,
For that moment,
To pretend
That I am Him.

Dann J. Flesher

6/5/2017